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Roy’s story
-- Continuation Writing
Rebecca Du
M3 Friendship
Free talk
Watch the video, and tell me what did the bird do when her friend the earthworm(蚯蚓） was in trouble
Watch the video, and tell me what did the bird do when her friend the earthworm(蚯蚓） was in trouble
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Objectives of the class
1
Use mind map of story mountain to understand the basic elements and general plot of the story.
2
Find out clues to make inference推测 and prediction.
3
Make an outline of the continuation story, share with the class and evaluate according to the rubric评价表.
4
Feel the importance of friendship and helping friends in need.
Prediction:
Look at the picture, what can you see and what do you think the story is about
Where it is in the picture
What was the boy doing
Why was the boy so surprised
Step 1: Read for
Elements and Plot
Quick Reading
1 The type of writing is
A Advertisement 广告 B Description 说明文
C Narrative 记叙文 D Argumentation 议论文
2 Read the first sentence of each paragraph, in what order is the material developed (1 min）
A order of place B order of topic C order of time
I remember the first time I met Roy...
Five years later... About three months ago...
Last week... This weekend....
Read for basic elements and plot and fill in the story mountain(key words and sentences).
Beginning
Characters:
____________
Setting:
____________
The first time I met Roy，Roy was...,then we...
Five years ago, Roy's father...
Last week, the charity money...
About three months ago, I saw Roy...
Climax
This week, I found...
Ending:

Read for basic elements and plot and fill in the story mountain.
Beginning
Characters:
Daniel, Roy
Setting:
The same class school
Before, Roy told joke, became good friends
Five years later, Roy’s father was knocked over, moved to smaller houses to manage financially
Last week, the class lost 500 charity money
About 3 months ago, Daniel saw Roy taking others’ wallet but put it back
Climax
This week, I went to his bedroom but found 500 paper notes in his coat
Ending:

Step 2: Read for
Characters and Theme
Read the passage and choose the best descriptions of emotions, feelings and personalities to show the change.
Personality and Feeling of Daniel (I)
Personality and Feeling of Roy
Relationship between Roy and Daniel
Read the passage and choose the best descriptions of emotions, feelings and personalities to show the change.
Personality and Feeling of Daniel (I)
Personality and Feeling of Roy
Relationship between Roy and Daniel
b. shy
& lonely
g. become good friends
f. silent and moody
j. see each other from time to time, but no longer close
a. clever and hardworking
c. lose all interest in his work
d. Roy started avoiding Daniel
h. I hoped Roy would explain why
e. started to get to know people
i. popular
Read the passage and choose the best descriptions of emotions, feelings and personalities to show the change.
Personality and Feeling of Daniel (I)
Personality and Feeling of Roy
Relationship between Roy and Daniel
b. shy & lonely
g. become good friends
f. silent and moody
j. see each other from time to time, but no longer close
a. clever and hardworking
c. lose all interest in his work
d. Roy started avoiding Daniel
h. I hoped Roy would explain why
e. started to get to know people
i. popular
1 Why did Daniel feel less lonely
2 Why did Roy became silent and moody, and lost interest in work after father’s death
3 Why were we no longer close after Roy’s father died
4 Why Roy started avoiding Daniel after being seen stolen
Make inference（推测） about the change. Discuss in group: what causes the change.
Personality and Feeling of Daniel (I)
Personality and Feeling of Roy
Relationship between Roy and Daniel
b. shy & lonely
g. become good friends
f. silent and moody
j. see each other from time to time, but no longer close
a. clever and hardworking
c. lose all interest in his work
d. Roy started avoiding Daniel
h. I hoped Roy would explain why
e. started to get to know people
i. popular
1 Why did Daniel feel less lonely
2 Why Roy became silent and moody, and lost interest in work after father’s death
3 Why were we no longer close after Roy’s father died
4 Why Roy started avoiding Daniel after being seen stolen
Because friendship warmed him and gave him sense of belonging.
They have financial problem and are in need of money. He loved his father too much and was so sad.
Roy became silent and moody and didn’t tell Daniel about his feeling.
Daniel didn’t communicate and understand Roy.
Because he was afraid that Daniel could report him.
Because he felt ashamed and guilty.
What may be the theme of the story
When I was lonely, Roy helped me fit into the class.
Roy became silent and moody and lost interest in work.
Roy’s father died
Friendship
We became good friends and trust each other, talking about personal matters.
Roy loses friends.
Roy even stole money.
Did Roy stole 500 pounds
Roy helped me when I was in need.
Now Roy was in need, What should I do to help Roy
A friend in need is a friend in deed.
What to do
Step 3: Discussion
Discuss in Group.
Did Roy steal the ￡500charity money
——If Roy stole the money, what did Roy use it for What would you do, would you report him or help him How could you help him
——If Roy didn’t stole the money, how did Roy get 500 paper notes What would you do or what would you say
Roy
Daniel
Did Roy steal the ￡500charity money
——If Roy stole the money,
——If Roy didn’t stole the money,
Roy
Daniel
What to use
Family lacks money
What Roy wanted to buy Life ...
How to do
earn by himself
part-time
from relatives
from friends
...
How to get
Ask to return back？
Raise money for him
Help him
find a part-time job ...
How to do
Apologize for misunderstanding
Encourage and comfort him
Tell jokes to him
Talk and help
Step 4: Continue the story (outline)
Continuation writing:
According to the inference, continue the story.
It looked as if there was about 500 there. I was so surprised that I just stood there, holding the nots in my hands. At that moment, the door swung open, and Roy walked in.
Group work and write the outline(key words and key sentences about plot, what did they do or say) of your story. Then share your story.
1 When Roy saw I was taking paper notes in my hand, what did Roy do or say
2 What would I do to ask Roy about the truth How did Roy explain
3 Hearing the explanation, what did I do or say
4 What happened next and what was the ending
It looked as if there was about 500￡there.I was so surprised that I just stood there, holding the nots in my hands. At that moment, the door swung open, and Roy walked in.
Ending: ____________________________
Friendship
It looked as if there was about 500￡there.I was so surprised that I just stood there, holding the nots in my hands. At that moment, the door swung open, and Roy walked in.
Ending: ____________________________
Friendship
Share your story!
Evaluation scale
评价维度 具体项目 评分
（总20分）
内容 文章理解到位，续写情节符合原文设定，且不重复原文内容 1/2/3/4/5
所设情境符合真实生活，具有合理性 1/2/3/4/5
续写根据原文情节展开，具有丰富性和创造性 1/2/3/4/5
续写体现原文主旨，主题突出或有升华 1/2/3/4/5
Example: How will the story develop
A friend in need is a friend in deed.
We became good friends again.
He said he felt guilty and ashamed last time he stole others’ wallet.
Roy didn’t steal the money.
I asked Roy about the paper notes.
Roy explained he worked for part time job and earned the money.
I apologized for my misunderstanding and said my ignorance of his sad feelings.
In daily time, I told jokes to Daniel to help him recover from sadness. I also shared inspiring stories to cheer him up.
Example: How will the story develop
A friend in need is a friend in deed.
We became good friends again.
I sympathize with Roy and said I would help him.
Roy stole the money.
Roy was surprised and felt ashamed.
Roy told me about his bad experience and didn’t have another choice.
Return back the money to the teacher and apologize, students raise money to help Roy.
Homework
Develop your outline into a passage (about 100 words).
Friendship

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