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Outside the Box
The Harvestfest contest（丰收节比赛） was falling on Friday and everyone in school was talking about it. All the students would show up in their self-made costumes（装扮）and a winner would be chosen by the principal.
“Do you have your costume for the Harvestfest contest ” Alice asked. “I’m going as a chocolate bar. My mom and I have been working on it all week.”
“ Yeah, I have a costume,” said Jordan Eastman, popping up the two front wheels of his wheelchair as he waited for his dad to pick him up. “But it’s boring.”
“Why What is it ” Alice asked.
“MaxMag the superhero, but Danny, Tom and Izzy are all going as MaxMag too.” Jordan shook his head. “That’s too many to stand a chance at winning the contest.” He waved to his dad, who had just pulled up in front of the school.
Jordan rolled his wheelchair toward his dad, and Alice walked with him to the minivan（小货车）.
“Maybe you should go as something else.”
“The contest is Friday night.” Jordan sighed. “It’s too late to change costumes.”
“Jordan, you have to think outside the box. Look around your house and see what you have. There’s hidden potential in everyday items.” She took a sip of her drink, and told Jordan that her chocolate-bar costume was made from old fabric her mom had lying around and recycled plastics.
On his way home, Jordan was quiet. He kept thinking about Alice’s words: Think outside the box.There’s hidden potential in everyday items. When he got home, he found his mum handling with some wooden pieces. She was putting a new desk together. On top of the desk was the huge empty cardboard box the pieces had come in. Mom smiled at Jordan, pointing at the desk, “What do you think ”
题型分析:
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述的是主人公Jordan准备参加学校周五举办的丰收节装扮比赛（The Harvestfest contest ），他很想赢得比赛，同时也很喜欢超级英雄这个人物，但是他现在的装扮太普通了，完全不可能胜出，这时，Alice讲述自己的巧克力块装扮的材料来源，鼓励他要积极跳出思维定势（think outside the box），发掘日常用品的潜藏功能，及时更改装扮。苦苦思索的Jordan回到家，发现妈妈刚刚拼装好新桌子，上面是包装桌子配件的硕大的空纸箱。空纸箱是否会给他灵感，让他产生让人惊喜的创意制作呢 他最后是否会赢得比赛呢
五要素：
When---when Jordan was preparing for the Harvestfest contest
Where---in the school, at home
Who-----主要人物: Jordan;
次要人物: Alice; Mom;Dad; principal;Danny, Tom and lzzy
What---Jordan was thinking about his costume hard
Why---He wanted to win the contest
主次人物分析
主要人物要在每一段中体现，次要人物可能出现在续写中，不必一一列出，考生可以根据自己的故事情节进行合理安排。
人物情感和性格分析
Alice给Jordan的建议,鼓励她。其实在文章中起了很关键的作用.最后一个较为关键的次要人物是在文本最后出现的Mom，根据handling with some wooden pieces. She was putting a new desk .Mom smiled at Jordan, pointing at the desk可推测出来妈妈后续可能会给予Jordan一些帮助.（work together）
挖掘文章人物的情感
根据续写第一段It’s perfect ...With my wheelchair可知，此时Jordan心里应有了初步方案，因此第一段应主要围绕着Jordan如何利用家里的材料将wheelchair进行一些改装。根据续写第二段Soon it was Friday night, and Jordan couldn't wait to show his costume 这段应围绕着获奖成功，校长颁奖后Jordan的收获。
心理活动分析
文本心理描写不多，因此，续写心理描写不应占据过多篇幅，主要集中在Jordan的一些思考。这里要指出的是有的同学会在第一段中过分描写Jordan不知所措的心理，这是不应该的。因为续写第一段第一句话it’s perfect....with my wheelchair已经暗示Jordan此时应已经想出来方案了，接下来只需要描写具体动作过程即可。第二段比赛可能会有一些心理描写，通过这次的经历他终于明白了Think outside the box的含义，通过心理描写带出主旨，升华文章。
分析续写段首，确定续写方向
由第-一段首句内容Jordan's eyes fell on the box and he smiled,“It's perfect...with my wheelchair.” ( Jordan的目光落在了盒子上然后他笑了和我的轮椅--起，非常完美) 可设问如下:
(1）What did he do then
（2）What was mom's reaction Did she offer a hand
（3）What object was the wheelchair finally transformed into
（4）What was his feeling at that moment
5)How did he feel
6)Did he win the contest
7)What was other's reaction to his costume
8)What is the meaning of“outside the box”
情节设计
Paragraph 1:
【开端】Jordan的目光落在盒子上，想到了做制作costume的主意
【发展】Jordan和妈妈一起制作装扮一顺利完成，等待周五。
Paragraph 2:
【高潮】周五到了，Jordan追不及待要展示装扮他有点紧张但是又很骄傲，因为他非常满意他的装扮一获得全场关注。
【结局】装扮大放异彩，Jordan获奖。Jordan体会到了outside the box的意思，并且不定决心以后要做自己的creator，不再inside the box。
范文
Jordan's eyes fell on the box and he smiled. "It's perfect...with my wheelchair." Seeing the puzzled look on his mum's face, Jordan quickly told her the design of his new costume---MaxMag on his car. She smiled and gave him a thumbs up. “No time to wait! Let's get started!” exclaimed his dad who just went in. For two nights, they cut, pasted, folded and unfolded the box; they drew on it and colored it to make it look like a real car; and they glued the old MaxMag costume onto it. When the new costume was finally ready, Jordan tried it on several times and continued to make necessary changes until he was satisfied..
Soon it was Friday night, and Jordan couldn't wait to show his costume. When he wheeled himself into /rolled the wheel to the party, others couldn't believe his costume. “The MaxMag and his car That's awesome!" Danny's eyes lit up. “You even have the headlights! It's so cool." Izzy pointed to the front. Jordan beamed. “Thanks!" Then it was time to announce the winner, “The winner of this year's Harvestfest costume contest is ...", the principal exclaimed loudly, “Jordan Eastman!” Everyone clapped. It dawned on him that every item has a hidden potential and he should think outside the box.

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