2023年新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷读后续写精深解读

2023-06-22 17:02 来源: 学好语文并不难

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各地历年读后续写一览表

纵观历年各地高考英语中的读后续写，我们很容易发现，各类动物的出现是体现人与自然主题，引导学生提高生态环保意识的重要手段。人与自我主题，尤其是凸显青少年的自我迷茫、自我学习、自我突破、自我领悟、自我成长的过程。

读后续写的主题也正从奇遇类文章（如：人狼大战、人熊邂逅）逐渐过渡到了日常生活类文章（如：社区助人、家庭之爱、师生之情）。

2023年新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷读后续写很显然是一篇非常典型的人与自我的故事。主要讲述了作为英语非母语的主人公，原本非常讨厌写作，但是在老师的鼓励下参加了英语作文比赛并获奖。

整个故事主要围绕Conflict — Solution，体现了学习语言的真正功能——“语用”和“育人”。读后续写可以说是对语用能力的极致体现，考查了考生综合语言运用能力的方方面面。那么如何才能写好续写部分呢？

今天我们就以2023年新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷读后续写为例，简单三步让同学们掌握人与自我类读后续写，创作出高分范文。

真题再现

When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest, I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.

So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.

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I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny, and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice.

What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.

When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win, I wouldn’t care.

注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.______________

I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.___________________________

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